A pat on the back!

Biting cold … colder than ever before. Pitch dark … just few days past the new moon day  which means the moon was just peeping through, probably for the kiddos who would not have even a grain of rice without catching a glimpse of their Chanda Mama 💡

Oooooooooooo howled the dogs and tak  tak tak tak from the Gurkha’s lathi provided superb background effect. Windows closed, curtains drawn! She pulled over her new quilt and lay down hoping to catch up with some blissful sleep before the alarm would go tringggggg the next day! Nt the time she could hit the snooze button too! The exams were on and if not this, the Mommy alarm would have done the needful with those sweetish bitter words that she could anyway sleep for long hours once the exams are over;)

Laying down cosily and that too the new colourful quilt .. awww felt like heaven and she so wanted to be cuddled up in bed with only her books for company and some favourite music playing in the the background.

The clock struck one and she could count the no. of hours she could stay in this dreamy cosy state on one hand itself .. just 4! She closed her eyes immediately brushing away all those sweet things she ws dreaming about.

She is fast asleep when she feels a pat on her back.  Ignores! She feels it again! ‘Shoo‘ she says and adjusts her quilt. The third time and she yells @ her sister ‘Y dumbo, y r u dng this? Whatz that u want? No answer.  Raises her voice this time ‘Hey loose, am asking you what do u want?’  She feels the sister is pretending to be in deep sleep and is fooling her. Shakes her violently and now is her turn to be rebuked. ‘U stupid, y r u waking me up’ says the sister with her eyes closed!

Nw, she is shocked 😯  or was it scared 👿 Did not help either that the watchman had told her that he had seen Mohini [the beautiful ghost clad in a white saree, hairs left open and that sound of the jingles!] in front of the apartment a few days back 😯  She turned back to see who was playing games with her! A pair of green eyes looked @ her and she was dumbstruck for a moment. It ws as though the two of them were playing the game of ‘Who will blink first’ And then, the black beauty spoke ‘MEOW MEOW‘.

Ahhhhhhh Amma Ayyo Rama Rama she yelled and jumped out the of the bed! The sister woke up immediately in a state of shock and the mother ran to her room. All three of them stood staring @ the cat! The cat ws scared by now and found no place to run out! It demonstrated its ever-famous cat walk on the quilt which served like the carpet. The Mom and daughters moved to one side now and gave way for the cat to run away and so it did! Dad had joined the fun by now and all four of them had a hearty laugh at ‘The Mystery of the Pat on the Back’

Wonder what is it with me and the cats! A few years before this, a cat had made my wardrobe its home along with 4 of its kittens! And for heaven’s sake, I still don’t know how and when it got into my locked cupboard!  It would not allow me to even take my dresses from the wardrobe as it was probably scared of what we would do to its kids 🙂 God bless the Mothers 🙂

Anyways, thatz about my love affair with the cats. Any such love affair u ppl have experienced in life 😛 I would love to know 🙂

Meow Meow Meow err Have a gr8 day 🙂

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  1. This is indeed a scary mohini…ghost…post.
    So did you try imitating the cat walk?????
    I can imagine you doing it…funny and exciting post yaar..

    Me first or comments moderated???

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            1. Ha ha u r welcome to my place 😛
              But competition, I am nt sure 😛
              Well, b/w whom 😉

              I think Aryan wil win outright ha ha ha 😉
              He wil say he is a blue cat then!

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  2. So this was the story you had mentioned.. !!

    Scary.. Really scary. I’m quite scared of all animals. I would’ve done the same thing you did ! RUN.

    I liked the beginning a lot. Made me want to go sleep right away 😉

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  3. whoa.. must have been real scary.. nice recount of the story swaru.. did this scary experience in addition to the exam fear give u sleep less nights afterward?

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  4. Swaram, Loved this post… 😛
    Full of suspence and kept me on my toes… I liked your description of how the cat decided to wake you up 😛

    And your sister screaming at you for waking her up 😀

    I was able to imagine the whole situation and was lol 🙂

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  5. That sounded like a story,dear! Only later,knew it was about you 😛

    cats, and dogs, masters of all houses :D!!

    So, what did you do the kittens and their mother in your wardrobe??

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  6. And you know what?I hate cats, dogs are lovelier…..But here, cats are celebrities.

    Sigh 😦 A dog took away my new Reebok shoe 😛 I hate them officially 😛 😛

    In the house we lived earlier, the lift was located one level above our floor level. The day we went to pay our advance after finalising, the cat caught us mid-way,and would not let us move. A black one at that! V scary. I screamed(despite the newness of the place), V shooed the cat away finally. That day, I was scared and prayed never to see it again. Guess what, we never saw it again, in the two years of our stay there! That was really surprising!!Now,tell me, shouldn’t I thank for the answered prayer? 🙂 😉
    Ha ha ha .. u shud 😉 😉

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  7. Darna mana hai or darna zaroori hai … 😀 …nice i felt like i was reading a story
    swaram, I hate pet’s .But unfortunatily my sister love pets a lot.So when i was small we had dogs , kittens,puppy’s,cat in our house for her sake.Anyways thank god ,now we don’t have anything except a dog(in my native :D)
    4 kittens and cat in your wardrobe????????? …….u r kidding right 😀
    U know , if it would have happend here ,then that will be good enough to spoil my one day 😀

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  8. Lol!! whats there to be scared of cats???!!! we practically grew up around cats, dogs, rabbits, fishes, tortoise!! ours was a mad house!! 🙂 Loved how u narrated it though! ..

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  9. heheh this reminded me of our school days tale “NaaLe baa” 😀 anything mysterious around us we would account it to naaLe baa alwa.. heheheh

    Ha ha nangu gnapka ide adhu 😛 Doors mele ella bardidru alva 😉 😉

    the way you narrated the whole sleep before alarm goes off scene was neat 🙂 loved that part.
    Thank u 🙂
    poor cat, it must have got confused. and you had a cat and its kittens inside your wardrobe? wow.. i would have run away without leaving a note 😛
    Ha ha ha wish I cud 😉 Elli odi hogadu gotirlilla aa vayasinalli 😛

    I develop an unfriendly attitude when I see anything that has more than two legs. these days i can just about tolerate dogs.
    Ha ha gud one 😉

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  10. You scared me 🙂 I thought you were going to see some ghost standing over you 🙂

    Ha ha ha! Wonder if I wud hv become one too in such a case 😉 😉

    Cats! I never had a cat or any pet, for that matter 😦 But both my grandads did 🙂 There was this dog, a hugs floppy haired Tommy used to be my best friend when I went to my grandparent’s place for vacations. It used to jump on me, and stand with it’s paws on my shoulders -and I used to feel like somebody out of Enid Blyton’s books 🙂
    Oh same pinch 🙂 There were too dogs @ my grandparents too – Cookey and Floppy 😛

    And my uncle’s place, one time, I was lucky enough to be around when their cat had kittens! But as you say, the mummy cats are so protective that she would never let us kids near by. Finally we got to see the little tiny babies only after a few days 🙂 Tiny mewling babies with their eyes shut! Oh! That was wonderful! I wish I could show Poohi that!

    Oh ya Smithu .. its a lovely sight na 🙂 Wish Poohi gets to see them sometime 🙂

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  11. haha, that was very dramatical writing, it got me into the mood, for I thought you are telling some scary story 🙂 must have been quite a fun laughing at the incident. I love cats, in fact had one kitten (stray which got attached to us), everynight we keep it outside, but somehow it would come in and sleep on my back(when I am sleeping on my stomach), or under my arm, or wherever it finds a cozy warm place 🙂

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    1. Oh u hd a catty friend 😛 So nice 🙂 So, it finally boils down to the fact that they need a cosy place!

      Hmmm…. so my new quilt ws the culprit 😉 😉

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  12. 🙂 u shd sung ur tingu tingu tingu song to tht cat..it wud’ve become ur pet :)..ever since i read tht song its running in my mind non stop 😀 tingutingutingu 😀

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  13. For a moment, I thought I was reading some scary novel…I was imagining every scene you described in mind and was thinking what was going to happen next 🙂 🙂

    Nicely written Swaram….

    And I Lovvvvee cats

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  14. going by the header and the introduction i thought u were writing fiction 🙂

    cats are scary 😐
    for that matter 1st i am scared of dogs then cats, then snakes and ..for now only these animals…:D

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        1. Ha ha ok 😛
          I found it so difficult to throw the other one of the pair u know … ws so optimistic I wud find it some day! Alas, the day never came 😦

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  15. LOL

    its a very well narrated piece swaram… i am good with cats but any flying insects and lizards bring out the same in me

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    1. I am nt bad too Mons but a cat patting my back @ night when it ws least expected – sure ws scary then he he 😉

      gr8 to c u here during ur vacation 😀 Hope u r hvng a gr8 time 🙂

      Muahs to my BF 😉

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  16. wow…
    what a love story 😉
    khekz khekz ( sound of laughter)

    well swaram, I don’t have such love stories in life. I can’t live with others than human 😀

    pleasure for your story really 🙂

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  17. LOL
    :-))
    You know what there is a cat who has her kittens and leaves them in our verandah every few yrs – and then they merrily dig up our plants and throw the soil all around 🙂

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  18. Ooooooooooooo is a sound I wanted to making watching Pazhassiraja! 🙄

    Most of the gals seem to have this special love affair with Cats! Crazy 😛

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  19. Aww my cat gives me a pat on cold nights, asking to share the quilt… cats cant bear cold! Loved this adorable story of Mohini the cat 😉
    …by the way all watchmen have seen some ghosts, most probably in their sleep 🙂 While on duty 😉

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  20. Are you celebrating Halloween, Swar? 😀

    Ha..ha..ha.. I just imagined you opening your almirah to get a dress and there comes a furry cat. 🙂

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  21. ROTFL :))) May be the cat wud have thought “this lady is not giving a place for me in her heart. let me atleast take a place at her wardrobe” 😛 😛 😛

    So how is the cat and its kittens now ;))

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  22. LOL….initially I thought it was a fictional ghost story…but then the words “You can sleep however much you want after the exams” sounded familiar 🙂 But I never expected the cat to be the leading star in the story..hehehe. I hope you scored well in the exams the next day!

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  23. Hee hee.
    There was a Billa (a big male cat) who used to wake me up every morning by scratching on my hands. Wasn’t a pet :).
    And a cat had made our backyard her favorite place for having kittens :).
    So can identify a lot with you. Poor Sis though :).

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  24. that was quite scary till the truth was out …starting those green eyes would have been really scary !!
    good that u didn’t get scared of cats after that

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  25. Eeww, I can imagine what you went through. Reminded me of what happened when I opened the bathroom back at my parents place in the village. Something caght my hand and no sound would come out of my throat when I tried to scream. It was a rat!!

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  26. LOL I can only imagine how funny and comic it might have been….jumping and yelling aayoo raama raama….LOL 😀

    “Mystery of the pat on the back” – That should have been the title of this post.

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    1. That ws the title initially but then i thot it wud tell a bit too much 😛 😛 This also gives room to think its abt some accomplishment when ppl read the title 😀

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  27. Meawwww… that was brillliant! Very spooky description, and I was hoping against hope that it wasn’t Miss Mohini afterall 🙂 I hate cats too , btw!

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  28. 🙂
    I had a horrible experience with a cat which was not a pet and used to move around in neighborhood. I was going to the roof by stairs and we have stairs going from inside of our house to roof and thus surrounded by walls on both sides and thus a narrow one. It was dark in night and as I am familiar with the stairs, I didn’t put on the lights.
    There was a cat sitting on the top of stairs and as soon as I was 2-3 steps away, it jumped suddenly from nowhere on my head, using my head as intermediate step and passed me from above. It’s claws punched in the head and I was shocked.
    Still afraid of cats 😀 except the kitten 🙂

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  29. The cat wouldve got the shock of his /her life ! I know how you stare at people, its scary ! and you blame the cat for everything. Your looks and your shrieking after that…man….btw, did that cat live long enough ??? 😀 😀 😀

    Shrieking!!!! Nw when the hell did I do that!!!!!
    I dont agree abt the scary eyes part too actually 😛

    and the other cat who lived in your wardrobe….im sure it had no other option….”come on kids, we have no other choice but to live here. I know, I am being a bad mother by making you all stay with me in this mess…”
    Baah! U see outside what u r inside 😉 😉

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  30. What Swaram….
    You scared me till death…..ok…not that much but yes
    for a moment I thought you have doena dnaganaka dance with mohini…
    superb cat…who could scare you….
    My sister is a always a friends with cat….

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